Reviews on Bewitched

I thought it might be fun to publish some of the reviews on Bewitched made by some big-time reading blogsites. To begin with, Tara from “” let me blog for here. You can go to this link to see the questions and answers I gave regarding writing and Bewitched specifically. Here are a few sites where they announce the release of Bewitched: is a review of Bewitched:

I didn’t know what to think of this story when I first read the synopsis. There are a lot of stories about witches but very few with a male protagonist that is fighting against the witches. I thought it’d be an interesting take on an old tale (witches and warlocks, good vs. evil) and I’m glad to say that it was.

I got drawn into the story right along Darren, I wanted to know if Samantha was a witch (and I had some questions about Andrea as well). I liked the interplay between the characters, it seemed like they were really in high school with petty jealousies flaring up, girlfriends worried about their relationships, and the guys worried about make State Finals in basketball. When you add the paranormal elements to the story, the story and the characters got more fleshed out. One of the most overlooked characters (especially at the beginning), but became one of my favorites was Crissy. There was just something about her even though we really don’t get to see her that much in the first third of the book. For those few pages she was in and the few sentences she uttered, she intrigued me. I was glad that my liking her was vindicated in the latter half of the book. It just reminded me that the most unexpected things can come in small packages.

The only had an issue with two things in the book: keeping the characters separate in my mind at the beginning of the book and the introduction of Darren’s powers. I know the story is set in high school but there were times when it was really hard to keep track of who was important in Darren’s circle of friends. When we’re first introduced to them we meet around
six new characters all at once, all of who are cheerleaders or basketball players. Even though the names were different it was I found myself having to stop and figure out who exactly these characters were to Darren. It got better, though, as the story continued and Harris fleshed his characters out more.

The other issue, the introduction to Darren’s powers, was a little rushed in my mind. I know Darren’s been hearing these stories for years from his grandfather (so the idea of magic isn’t that hard for him) but I, as the reader, have not been privy to these stories. As such, when Darren is being introduced to this whole new world I had trouble keeping up at times. There was a lot of information revealed in a short period of time that I was left wondering how it all interconnected. But like before, Harris does a good job of showing what is important to the story line.

Overall I liked the book and am interested in seeing where Harris goes next with the story.

Another review:

Bewitched is an urban fantasy story told from a male perspective. Darren’s just a typical teenage boy, but with a less than
happy life at home. His brother’s dead, and his parents have withdrawn into a half-life. How could it get worse? What’s even worse is that he’s actually part of this “magical” group that makes him think his family’s bonkers. 

To be completely honest, I liked darren’s perspective, but just liked. Though Mark Jay Harris created a comfortable character to read, I didn’t feel like he had that grit of a teenage boy. Darren’s monologue and dialogue didn’t feel entirely real, and while I find that alright, he could’ve used an extra edge to make Darren a real character that I could sympathize with and connect to.

While I do find Darren’s character a bit lacking in the “real” sense, I admire Harris’ ability to mesh different characters together in a way that creates texture. Do you know what I’m talking about? No? In simpler words, Harris creates characters
to provide different feelings, different atmospheres for his readers. That’s something to be admired.

As a conclusion, yes, Bewitched may have some points that can do with a bit of improvement, but for a first novel, this is a truly exciting read. The world-building, different characters can all easily suck one in, and I’m glad that Inkspell Publishing, who are amazing, gave me this opportunity to be a tour host for Bewitched!

And another good review:

The story starts of with Ethan’s funeral, Darren’s brother, who at the time was a normal high school student until he started seeing weird things happening around him that he could only see. Unaware of what was happening to him, he decides to
ignore them, but it was hard to do so when his grandfather start telling him what he is and what he is destined to do. The story takes off from there, and it becomes one with twists and turns that left me wanting for more. It was well written, full of action, secrets and surprises. When a new girl, Samantha, enrolls as a student in the same high school, Darren is left to wonder whether or not there is a reason why she was there. The interactions that he has with those closest to him are vital in order to fulfill his destiny, they all play an important role in his life. The complexity of the characters make the story just
that much more interesting and exciting to read. Mark’s use of detail and history (with a twist) made the story believable. The ending left me wanting for more. Overall, Mark Harris has created a world that is exciting, where witches, demons, and those that are after the witches coexist. From the first page to the last, I was able to go into this world that he has created with so much detail. I was intrigued and bewitched by this story, and I can’t wait to read the next book of the series, “The Return of the Familiar.”

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Here’s a really great review:

With a book cover showcasing a boy playing with fire, I sort of assumed the protagonist would be somebody who had already mastered the art of fire magic …

I was wrong.

Darren leads a relatively normal life.  He is a basketball team player.  He has a few good friends.  He likes to have fun and he has a pretty girlfriend.  Life on the outside seems good but he knows his parents are still mourning the death of his big brother.  When he discovers the secret compartment in his big brother’s room and retrieves its content, he knows his dying grandfather has been telling him tales that are not fabricated but real.  Being a part of an ancient order, the “Pessum Ire”, whose duty is to destroy witches, Darren feels helpless – his grandfather is not in the right state of health to be his mentor and he has no idea how to prepare himself to face the evil witches.  Will he suffer the same tragic death just like his big brother?

I must say I was a little disappointed at first when I learned that Darren did not know what he could possibly do to tap into his supernatural power.  It’s like he’s so clueless about himself.  How can he be so powerless??  I was baffled, but as I read and got to know him a bit better, I started to see him more as a determined survivor and less as a frustrated teenager.  No
doubt, it’s unfortunate that he had no one to “show him the way” but it didn’t necessarily mean he had a lesser chance to stay alive.

In the story, Darren suffers not just from his ill-fated duty, but also from betrayals of those who are around him.  I’m pretty marveled by the number of evil witches that are in disguise and because Darren is not trained to discern witches from normal people, he is defenseless.  But I like that Darren never uses his lack of training as an excuse to enslave himself as a
helpless victim.  His determination to get out of his mess opens him to uncover a world of allies, magic and power and I like that the outcome and reward are both pleasing and satisfactory.

I guess what intrigues me the most is that I could never be certain about whether a person is a true friend or foe until the very last page of the book.  The hint of what’s truly evil lies not just in those who are power hungry but also in the deceptive, self-fulfilled nature of foresight and prophecy.  There are so many intricate layers to the plot that I can’t help but be amazed.

And while my assumption about Darren being this skilled teenager with fire magic was not entirely accurate, the image on the book cover does capture the essence of the climactic moment of the story.  Although I feel somewhat relieved that
most of the evil people are now identified, I know something devilishly sinister is looming and I look forward to reading the next installment when it’s available.


Here are five tips for scaling the editing wall:

1. Do not read too many editing books while you are editing.

A book I would recommend for editing your own drafts is Revision and Self-Editing by James Scott BellIt’s a fantastic book and should help in many ways.  The other book I would recommend is Donald Mass’s Writing the Breakout NovelThis  is like a Bible for authors. Especially first-time authors who want to knock their first book out of the park. Donald Mass is brilliant and his book is excellent, but reading it while you are editing will put the pressure on. It makes you really want to do the writing equivalent of hitting that home run in the bottom of the 9th–in the World Series.

Imagine learning baseball and expecting that kind of performance. But really, wouldn’t you have to learn to play baseball first? That might mean hitting a lot of flyballs.

Truth is, there are tons of great books on editing, tons of websites giving advice. If you want to read them, do, but take it in small doses. Read one chapter or maybe two, and do a round of edits. Then rest and read some more.

2. Give your manuscript time to breathe.

One of the first pieces of advice I got was to wait at least a week before reading the manuscript. I waited a day. As a result, I had no objectivity and overwhelm came in pretty quick. You have to give your manuscript time, which means slowing down.

3. Switch to a different tactile sensation.

Lots of us spend time in front of our computers. Too much time. Take time away. Print your MS on paper and read it. Make notes in the margins. Use colored pens. Then read it again. This time, make chapter scene notes on index cards (it keeps you brief). Write it on colored paper, with colored pens. Then you can arrange things and see if the order needs changing. I don’t have the science behind it, but it seems to bring about a kinesthetic approach, which is good for adult learning, and opens up new ways of thinking.

4. Take time off and be physical.

Go for a walk. Go do some yoga. Go for a run or to the gym, or even get a pedicure or massage. Letting off some steam not only helps you deal with stress, but it will pull you into a different state of mind, one that will process your story differently and give you more perspective. I also find that doing something physical reminds me of the world around me, which we forget when we’re in the minds of our characters. But if we don’t experience the world, we can’t experience it for them.

Seriously, live a little. It’s good for you.

5. Put your unconscious mind to work.

You know the old expression, “sleep on it”? Apparently, it really works. I read somewhere once about a study showing that people make better decisions if they meditate or sleep on something.  Take a nap, a hot bath, or meditate. There’s a great article on how meditation increases creativity here.

Final note:

Above all, the best way to avoid overwhelm is to trust yourself and your process. if you are creating or doing things that are new to you, it will be uncomfortable at first, but that’s all part of learning how you work. You are the best at figuring out what works for you. It’s an ongoing thing.

Thanks for visiting today! If you have have tried any of these tips and they’ve worked for you, please share in the comments below. Or, if you have worked through editing overwhelm in a different way, please let me know. I’m always looking for new ways to improve my own process.

“Bewitched is spell-binding! A highly-unique page-turner that hooks you from the first paragraph. With complex characters and unexpected twists and turns, Harris delivers and leaves you hoping for more!” – Stephanie Keyes, Author, The Star Child series

Is it love or is it  witchcraft? He’ll never find out if he kills her first.


The first time Darren saw Samantha, she was floating above his high school gymnasium during a basketball game, invisible to everyone but him. Next time he sees her, she’s sitting in front of him in class, wowing his friends and causing unexplainable things to happen that only he seems to notice. But things really  get strange (and complicated) when his dying grandfather tells him that he is part of an ancient order, the “Pessum Ire,” whose duty is to destroy witches. What does he do now, since he’s almost positive Samantha is a witch…and he’s
crushing on her pretty hard?



ABOUT THE AUTHOR: Mark Harris lives in Smithfield Utah, a small town located in a beautiful valley in Northern Utah. His wife, Shaundale, and he have four terrific children, two girls and two boys and a fifth one due to arrive in November of 2012. Mark has taught English and Special Education and currently works from home teaching English to people from all over the world. Writing has always been his true passion since he was a grade schooler writing about mushrooms. “Bewitched” will be his debut novel. He has two others underway and will soon start on the sequel to “Bewitched,” called “The Return of the Familiar.” He hopes you enjoy his work because he is working on several series geared toward younger audiences.

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So…Do you believe in witches? Completely or are you somewhat skeptical? Darren fell in love with a witch and it gets him in all sorts of trouble as you’ll find out in my book, coming out this Friday, March 1, 2013.  In the meantime, let’s see what everybody thinks.
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Check out the latest cover for Stephanie Keyes up coming novel release: THE FALLEN STARS. Looks like an excellent addition to her series with a beautiful cover!


“Imaginative and fast-paced. Couldn’t put it down!” –  E.G. Foley, New York Times Bestselling author of The Gryphon Chronicles 

“This well-written and intriguing fantasy was a delight to read. I can’t wait to read the second novel
in this
 – Linn B. Halton, author Never Alone on The Star Child by Stephanie Keyes

When all is lost, he will have to make the ultimate decision.

Kellen St. James was just your average seventeen-year-old prodigy, until he eighty-sixed the Lord of Faerie and proposed to a Celtic goddess. Now everything in Kellen’s life gets turned upside-down when Calienta, Kellen, and friend, Gabriel Stewart, find themselves on the run from a seriously irritated group of faeries. The worst part? They have zero idea why.
Suddenly, Kellen finds himself stuck in the middle of another prophecy that questions everything about him including where his loyalties lie. Plus, Calienta’s more than a bit different; she’s making choices that he doesn’t understand. And Gabe, his best friend? He’s started doing all sorts of freaky
things that make Kellen question who he really is.Kellen and Calienta will fight to stay together and keep the hidden part of the prophecy from becoming reality.

When the ultimate power is within reach, which side will he  choose?

Release Date: 12-April-2013, Genre: YA Paranormal Romance
Sounds good? If you liked Twilight by Stephanie Meyer, Need by Carrie Jones, or Fallen by Lauren Kate, you will love this book!

About the Author:


Stephanie Keyes has been addicted to Fantasy since she discovered T.H. White as a child and started drumming up incredible journeys in her head. Today, she’s still doing the same thing, except now she puts those ideas down on paper.
When she’s not writing Stephanie is also a graphic designer, presenter, teacher, musician, avid reader, and Mom to two little boys who constantly keep her on her toes. In addition, she’s best friend to her incredible husband of eleven years.

Keyes is the author of The Star Child YA Fantasy series, which currently includes The Star Child andThe Fallen Stars. She is currently hard at work on the third book in the trilogy.


Here’s Watson with his cousin Sampson. Watson is 2 1/2 months old in this shot. His cousin Sampson is exactly 2 months older than he is. They are both in the arms of their Nana and Papa. They are wearing their matching “Monster” p.j.’s they got from Nana and Papa for Christmas (which also matches the pajamas of my other boys, Chi and Talmage). 

Watson looks a little smaller than Sampson but he’s still a cute little “monster!” I think Matt, my brother-in-law, took the picture and managed to capture them both grinning (Watson and Sampson, not Nana and Papa). Good job Matt!!


Look at this fine piece of work! I love it! The cover of BEWITCHED turned out fantastic! I’m very excited about this final product.
The look of the main character – “Darren” came out just how I envisioned him. I didn’t see him exactly how the artist rendered him, with Justin Bieber hair wearing a hoodie, but conceptually it is spot-on. According to my description in the book, it’s actually quite accurate.
Plus, the fire in the hands looks intriguing and mystical – just like it should. How does this scene relate to the book? Well, you’ll have to read it to find out, but it’s very important to the story. Let me just say that historically witches were burned to death…hmmm…
What is that kid thinking?!? You’ll have to wait until March 1st, 2013 to find out for sure. 
The blurb:
The first time Darren saw Samantha she was floating above his high school gymnasium during a basketball game, invisible to everyone but him. Next time he sees her she’s sitting in front of him in class, wowing his friends and causing unexplainable things to happen that only he seems to notice. But things really get strange (and complicated) when his dying grandfather explains to him that he
is part of an ancient order, the “Pessum Ire,” whose duty is to destroy witches. What does he do now since he’s almost positive Samantha is a witch…and he’s crushing on her pretty hard? 
Thanks for dropping by and taking a look. And while here take a look around. Here’s the link to the first chapter if you want to whet your appetite:BEWITCHED CH. 1



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So, today I changed my baby’s diaper. I’ve changed it before, so it’s not like a big “Oh, he finally helped out with the baby!” kind of thing. Of course, Shaundale, my wife, changes Watson more than I do. Yes, we named him after Sherlock Holmes’ friend and confident. The name grows on you after a while.In any case, I change Watson’s diaper from time to time and I’ve found that when I do, I seem to have the same thought run through my head. As I unsnap the bottom of his sleeper, then unsnap the snaps on his onesy, suddenly I feel like I’m in a timed competition. I rip his diaper off him like it’s on fire, whip the clean diaper underneath him and slap the velcro stips across the front. I snap the onsey back in place like his and my lives depend on it being done before the next tick of the clock. Now I’m cramming his legs back into his sleeper like a person making sausage, and snapping the snaps back in place – sometimes snapping a leg snap to a crotch snap, correcting myself and muttering to myself about this unexcusable loss of time, thinking he’d be fine snapped together in a tangle, and only correcting my mistake because my score won’t count if he’s not put back together correctly. Finally, the last snap is snapped into it’s correct place and I raise my hand like a calf roper who has just trussed a baby cow in record time.

I have yet to actually time myself, so I don’t know if I’m breaking any old records from day-to-day, but it doesn’t stop me from looking at changing a diaper as a rodeo event. And at the end of each change I feel as if I have just had numbers posted on a huge digital board above some stall in a stadium.  “And the winner is, Watson’s Dad!!!”

Okay, I know everyone has something to say about the movie rendition of “Les Miserables” but I want to add my take on it.For my birthday the other day my wife took me (along with her family) to see the movie.

I loved the new approach to a musical, having the actors sing their parts lending all the emotion of the part to the song and recording it live as they perform – then going back and adding the
music later. I think it made the performance and the music much more powerful
than it would have otherwise been.